Writing assessment

Today we did our writing assessment and this is what I have done. I hope you like it

Today we have  been describing a machine and naming the machine and this is the machine that I chose and I described. I hope you like it.

              Today we have been thinking of some things of how to respect our camp area I picked the hall.I hope you like it

Today we have been doing persuasive writing. My topic was too much money is a bad thing vs too much money is a good thing. I hope you like it

By MJ

This week we practice our screencastify and we have been given on blogger buddy. I made this screencastify so my buddy knows more about me.

Should people use animals to help them?

Today  we learn about Persuasive writing, our task was to create a persuasive writing about animals   I hope you like it.

One more minute my reading

Task two

Orientation: Beginning of the story.

The beginning  was the Mitchell family works like a well-oiled machine.

The problem was the children’s keeps getting dirt and the children doesn't help there dad fold the clothes.

The opening was what will happen to dad and the clothes.

There were no solution

The conclusion was the time there mum got home there dad fall asleep because the children’s dad was so tired of doing the washing.

KA

Mum went to work for three days.

Dad did the washing.

The children’s clothes keeps getting dirty.

Dad was really tired.

The children run out of clean clothes

KB

He loves baking and he likes eating sweet things. He loves making sandcastles and he is lazy.he has black hair and he likes eating cake

CA

Flapped meaning it’s a wing that moves like up and down.

Foamy meaning a mass of small bubbles.

Plunged meaning jump or dive quickly.

Frothed meaning form or contain a rising or overflowing mass of small bubbles.

EB

This could happen in real life because some mum or dad needs to go to work for a few days and when adults gets really tired they fall asleep. Some children’s doesn't what to fold clothes.

My Reading

Whale - a very large sea animal

Whales navigate by using sound

Ocean -    the seas that surround the content of the earth especially one of the large named areas of this, the Pacific Ocean.

If something is wrong with there hearing, they can lose their way in  the ocean

Navigate - sail in or through a river or sea

Whales navigate by using sound.

Stranded - wash up on a shore

We found a stranded whale in the shallow waters of the reef near our school, on the east side of Rarotonga Island

Reefs -  a line of rocks or coral close to the surface of the sea.

When this happens,  Whales sometimes get stranded  on beaches and reefs.

Farewell - Interjection or noun goodbye

When Kakera died, we sang farewell to her.

Grave - a place where dead person are buried

so a front- end loader dug her grave.

Creatures - an animal or bird, or insects

The living creatures who share it with us.

My Holiday

First my family and I went swimming in QE2  I felt so excited to go down the slide.

 Then when we were down swimming we went I timezone I was so happy to play basketball in timezone and i got 135 points.

The next day my family and i went t watch Avengers Endgame.I was super excited to watch it and i almost ate all the popcorn. I was dissapointed at the end of the movie.

 Next day i went to play with Tutuoe we went biking and played soccer it was fun.

After we finished playing I went played games on my computer.

Pick a path the pirate ship

Today our teacher  made us choose what to do in writing and I chose pick a path and it's really cool you get to pick what will happen next check it out. - By MJ/Marx!