Hi guys,
So for the past few weeks we have been working on our heroes and villain writing and drawing.Before we make our story first we planned it. We need to describe our hero and villain then we put were the story will take place. My story takes place in an scary abandoned church and their will be a demon inside the church. The hero will be a priest and an guy that lives in a town.
This is my story.
One day it was really cold. James, who lived in a town that had run out of
wood for his chimney. He decided to go to a forest tomorrow to chop some trees.
The next day, James woke up at 7:00am and got ready to go to a forest that had many trees.
He started walking his way to the forest with his axe and cart wearing shorts and T-shirt.
He put on a jacket that was in his cart, to prevent any insects annoying him.
As he was walking he noticed that it was getting darker and darker as soon as he got
closer to the forest. A minute later he arrived at the forest. It was a really creepy scary
forest. He looked around and saw scary black birds with sharp beaks flying around the forest.
He could feel the strong wind blowing at his face. It was a really windy day, branches were waving
and leaves were flying everywhere. The trees were old and tall.
He tied a rope at the tree that he was chopping so it wouldn't fall on him.
He started chopping the trees with his sharp red axe. While he was cutting the
trees it suddenly turned really cold. It was like he was in Antarctica. He grabbed his
thick black jacket and put it on. A minute later he finished cutting his first tree and it
got really dark. He found a lost old lamp on his cart. He turned it on and when he turned it on
he saw something flying around on the bush. It was like a ghost flying around. He didn’t want to
come and look because he needs to finish cutting his tree. A minute later he started getting tired
and cut one last tree.
As he was cutting the last wood he felt the ground rumbling and an earthquake came.
He crawled under his cart and hid there. When the earthquake stopped he stayed underneath
the cart for a few minutes to see if there was going to be another one.
A minute later he went back to cut the last tree. When he was cutting the last tree,
he heard a scream, “ahhhhhh! Help meeeeeee!”.
He followed where the scream came from and ran like a rocket
launching to space. Three minutes later he found a church. The church looked pretty old.
There was some crack around the church walls. He looked around the church and saw blood and
some bodies cut in half. The bodies were as smelly as rotten food mixed together.
He was terrified of what he was seeing and he slowly and quietly walked back.
Bang! He saw a body thrown up the sky and the head was chopped off and blood went
flying at his face. Snap! He accidentally stepped on a branch while he was walking back.
He ran like he was about to beat Usain Bolt’s 100 metres record . He got to his house and
was so exhausted his hand was shaking he tried to sleep but he was still thinking about what
happened. The next morning he was still thinking about what happened to him yesterday.
So he told his neighbors and his neighbors spread it. It got to the news now everyone knows
about it.
When it got to the news it started spreading around the world until everyone
knew about it. So the presidents immediately called some of the priests that hunted
demons but the priest they called didn't want to because they knew that evil spirit was really
strong.
They could feel the energy blazing through their skin and they didn't want to die.
One week later they found a priest that really hunts evil spirits or demons and is brave
enough to fight the demon they call him demon hunter or Carl. They asked him to go to
James’s house and James would show him where it is so he went on a plane and went to
James country he found James house and asked him James where he found the church and
dead body. James agreed to take him there and they prepared for the journey they took holy
water and crossed.
James started walking to the forest with the priest/ Demon Hunter.
A minute later Carl can feel the energy through his skin. It feels like his skin was
getting cut. 5 minute later they found the forest and Carl could feel the energy cutting
through his skin. It was like his skin was cut by a chainsaw. Carl entered the forest but James
didn't want to but Carl begged him to come with him James finally agreed .
They entered the forest, saw the trees cut off and fresh red blood on the ground;
they followed the path and found the church. The church changed some more, cracks
appeared and birds died on the ground. Carl felt the energy at his skin and James was
really scared to go inside. They slowly silently walked inside the church. Bang! A piece of brick
fell from the top. When they looked around James and Carl was terrified they saw blood and
body in half everywhere some body was hanging at the top of the church. They started walking
at the scary hallway with a cross in their hands. As they were walking at the hallway they saw
crosses in half and holy water dripping. When they arrived where the priest sits they saw a big
hole beside it. Carl knew the demon came from there and he knew that the demon will be
somewhere in the church. He told James to be always active and to keep his eyes open.
Carl had an idea to make the demon come out. He told James to keep
praying and don’t stop praying. A minute of praying the church rumbled, there
were rocks falling and the chairs were breaking. It got really hot. It was like you were
in a crater on an active volcano. The Demon came out of the hole there were flames going
around his body he had ripped his shirt. His eyes were red as a lava and his face looked like the
person that will make you suffer for the rest of your life. RRRRRRAHHHH! He got so mad and
threw flames around the church. Carl was throwing holy water at him but it seems like it does
nothing to him. The demon approaches Carl and James. Carl and James slowly walk backwards.
They could feel the fire burning their skin even if they were far away.
They got so sweaty and the furniture that the demon was walking past was melting like an
ice cream. Carl keeps on throwing holy water on the demon but it still is not working.
The concrete that the demon was stepping at had his feet mark on the ground. When
James and Carl hitted the wall of the church James quickly thought of a plan. He grabbed
one of Carl's holy water and ran and threw holy water at the demon. Now the demon is
distracted Carl quickly puts holy water on his body while running away and on his sharp big cross.
When James was at the corner of the church Carl ran as fast as he could to the demon and
stabbed him with his cross. Then Carl took the cross out and poured the bottle of holy
water on his hand inside the demon’s body. The demon started getting weak until it
turned to dust. Carl had some burns on his skin when he stabbed the demon. The holy water
he poured on him protected him from getting burnt much.
THE DEMON”S EVILNESS WAS FINALLY OVER AND JAMES AND CARL WAS
GIVEN A BRAVERY MEDAL. James happily lived with Carl in a big house.
This is my drawing.
Thank you for looking at my blog
