My writing and drawing

 Hi guys,

So for the past few weeks we have been working on our heroes and villain writing and drawing.Before we make our story first we planned it. We need to  describe our hero and villain then we put were the story will take place. My story takes place in an scary abandoned church and their will be a demon inside the church. The hero will be a priest and an guy that lives in a town.

This is my story.

One day it was really  cold. James, who lived in a town that had run out of

wood for his chimney.  He decided to go to a forest  tomorrow to chop some trees.

The next day, James woke up at 7:00am and got ready to go to a forest that had many trees.

He started walking his way to the  forest with his axe and cart wearing shorts and T-shirt.

He put on a  jacket that was in his cart, to prevent any insects annoying him. 

As he was walking he noticed that it was getting darker and darker as soon as he got

closer to the forest.  A minute later he arrived at the forest. It was a really creepy scary

forest. He looked around and saw scary  black birds  with sharp beaks flying around the forest.

He  could feel the strong wind blowing at his face. It was a really windy day, branches were waving

and leaves were flying everywhere. The trees were old and tall.  

He tied a rope at the tree that  he was chopping so  it wouldn't fall on him.

He started chopping the trees with his sharp red axe. While he was cutting the

trees it suddenly turned really cold. It was like he was in Antarctica. He grabbed his

thick black jacket and put it on.  A minute later he finished cutting his first tree and it

got really dark. He found a lost old lamp on his cart.  He turned it on and when he turned it on

he saw something flying around on the bush. It was like a ghost flying around. He didn’t want to

come and look because he needs to finish cutting his tree. A minute later he started getting tired

and cut  one last tree.

As he was cutting the last wood he felt the ground rumbling and an earthquake came.

He  crawled under his cart and hid there. When the earthquake stopped he stayed underneath

the cart for a few minutes to see if there was going to be another one. 

A minute later he went back to cut the last tree. When he was cutting the last tree,

he heard a scream, “ahhhhhh! Help meeeeeee!”. 

He followed where the scream came from and ran like a rocket

launching to space. Three minutes later he found a church. The church looked pretty old.

There was some crack around the church walls. He looked around the church and saw blood and

some bodies cut in half. The bodies were as smelly  as rotten food mixed together.

He was terrified of what he was seeing and he slowly and quietly walked back.

Bang! He saw a body thrown up the sky and the head was chopped off and blood went

flying at his face.  Snap! He accidentally stepped on a branch while he was walking back.

He ran like he was about to beat Usain Bolt’s 100 metres record . He got to his house  and

was so exhausted his hand was shaking he tried to sleep but he was still thinking about what

happened. The next morning he was still thinking about what happened to him yesterday. 

So he told his neighbors and his neighbors spread it. It got to the news now everyone knows

about it.

When it got to the news it started spreading around the world until everyone

knew about it. So  the presidents immediately called some of the priests that hunted

demons but the priest they called didn't want to because they knew that evil spirit was really

strong. 

They could feel the energy blazing through their skin and they didn't want to die.

One week  later they found a priest that really hunts evil spirits or demons and is brave

enough to fight the demon they call him demon hunter or Carl. They asked him to go to

James’s house and James would show him where it is so he went on a plane and went to

James country he found James house and asked him James where he found the church and

dead body. James agreed to take him there and they prepared for the journey they took holy

water and crossed. 

James started walking to the forest with the priest/ Demon Hunter.

A minute later Carl can feel the energy through his skin. It feels like his skin was

getting cut. 5 minute later they found the forest and Carl could feel the energy cutting

through his skin. It was like his skin was cut by a chainsaw. Carl entered the forest but James

didn't want to but Carl begged him to come with him James finally agreed . 

They entered the forest, saw the trees cut off and fresh red blood on the ground;

they followed the path and found the church. The church changed some more, cracks

appeared and birds died on the ground. Carl felt the energy at his skin and James was

really scared to go inside. They slowly silently walked inside the church.  Bang! A piece of brick

fell from the top. When they looked around James and Carl was terrified they saw blood and

body in half everywhere some body was hanging at the top of the church. They started walking

at the scary hallway with a  cross in  their hands. As they were walking at the hallway they saw

crosses in half  and holy water dripping. When they arrived where the priest sits they saw a big

hole beside it. Carl knew the demon came from there and he knew that the demon will be

somewhere in the church. He told James to be always active and to keep his eyes open. 

Carl had an idea to make the demon come out. He told James to keep

praying and don’t stop praying. A minute of praying the church rumbled, there

were rocks falling and the chairs were breaking. It got really hot. It was like you were

in a crater on an active volcano. The Demon came out of the hole there were flames going

around his body he had ripped his shirt. His eyes were red as a lava and his face looked like the

person that will make you suffer for the rest of your life. RRRRRRAHHHH! He got so mad and

threw flames around the church. Carl was throwing holy water at him but it seems like it does

nothing to him. The demon approaches Carl and James. Carl and James slowly walk backwards.

They could feel the fire burning their skin even if they were far away. 

They got so sweaty and the furniture that the demon was walking past was melting like an

ice cream. Carl keeps on throwing holy water on the demon but it still is not working. 

The concrete that the demon was stepping at had his feet mark on the ground. When

James and Carl hitted the wall  of the church James quickly thought of a plan. He grabbed

one of Carl's holy water and ran and threw holy water at the demon. Now the demon is

distracted Carl quickly puts holy water on his body while running away and on his sharp big cross.

When James was at the corner of the church Carl ran as fast as he could  to the demon and

stabbed him with his cross. Then Carl took the cross out and poured the bottle of holy

water on his hand inside the demon’s body. The demon started getting weak until it

turned to dust. Carl had some burns on his skin when he stabbed the demon. The holy water

he poured on him protected him from getting burnt much.

 THE DEMON”S EVILNESS WAS FINALLY OVER AND JAMES AND CARL WAS

GIVEN A BRAVERY MEDAL. James happily  lived with Carl in a big house.

This is my drawing.

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