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Monday, 6 May 2019

My Holiday

First my family and I went swimming in QE2  I felt so excited to go down the slide.
 Then when we were down swimming we went I timezone I was so happy to play basketball in timezone and i got 135 points.


The next day my family and i went t watch Avengers Endgame.I was super excited to watch it and i almost ate all the popcorn. I was dissapointed at the end of the movie.
 Next day i went to play with Tutuoe we went biking and played soccer it was fun.
After we finished playing I went played games on my computer.




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  1. aryan7zdd@sockburn.school.com4 July 2019 at 14:49

    Hi MJ Aryan Here. I like the way that you have put paragraphs, time order. Next time maybe you should check your pronunciation and capital letters and also check that your text will stay together. This reminds me when I went swimming after that we went to watch a movie and I got tired of eating popcorn.

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